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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 3

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Feel free to compare it with the old version here.

I tried multiple things on this page. For one I actually tried drawing my own speech bubbles by hand.
I haven't done that ever since I stopped drawing comics on paper.

The other thing I tried was more Japanese text for sound effects. Because I can.
バーン reads as "baan" and it's used to makes things more dramatic.

And last, be not least, the other thing I tried as actually a new thing I've never done before. The center panel isn't bounded
by any panel borders and takes up the whole page. I think it turned out very nice and I plan on doing it again.

Here's some concept art for the forest.

EDIT:
Added a box that says "Half an Hour Later" in panel 1. I had forgotten that.
Now it should be less confusing as to how long it's been between pages.
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You'd think Tygo would notice the missing tree earlier :o